16:2716:27, 4 September 2020diffhist+593
Adverse Childhood Experiences Study
Undid revision 976041940 by
Sangdeboeuf (
talk) "It's a transition," he said. Calling it loaded is not truthful either. Disputed phrasing removed nonetheless. The study uses different definitions than the vast majority of people, noting that majority view is the very opposite of WP:UNDUE. Sexual abuse means from anyone. Domestic violence means against anyone. Should I make a new section instead?
12:0012:00, 31 August 2020diffhist+611
Adverse Childhood Experiences Study
Previous edit reverted as "unsourced POV", despite being objective fact supported by existing citation. Added citations and removed as many words as possible to avoid imagined POV. Readers will understand "sexual abuse" to mean "from anyone", and "domestic violence" to mean "against anyone," and those are not the definitions used. This demands clarification.
26 August 2020
01:0101:01, 26 August 2020diffhist+1,794
Adware
This article read like a pro-advertising industry blogger wrote it. Added more connections to other articles and made the POV more neutral by including more critical viewpoints.
25 August 2020
23:3923:39, 25 August 2020diffhist+575
Spyware
Improved lede with more connections to other articles including an additional source from one of them. Made the distinction that legitimate programs and websites can fit this term, not just rogue software.
07:0907:09, 8 April 2020diffhist+96
Magnox Reprocessing Plant
Changed the line mentioning the 2017 radiological event. It's almost certainly Mayak, of course- but nobody has admitted to it officially and the Russian government continues to impede investigations, so it has yet to be proven.