19:4319:43, 1 May 2008diffhist−48
Beryl Reid
"nearly steals the show" is peacock language, contrary to
WP:PEACOCK. Winning a BAFTA makes it sufficiently clear what a good job she did.
17:2117:21, 30 April 2008diffhist+64
Miguel Praia
Needs citation and change in tone. Sentences such as these are not for an encyclopedia: "New year, new team and a new motorcycle to learn from."
16:4316:43, 30 April 2008diffhist−190
Taos, New Mexico
Some statements needing citations are needed. Wiki is an encyclopedia, not a tourism advertising site. Self-advertising is contrary to
WP:CONFLICT. See discussion.
16:3416:34, 30 April 2008diffhist+15
Bohol Island State University
Article needs say more about the purpose, results, discoveries...anything...a list of names and when things were established is meaningless to a casual reader.
15:0715:07, 30 April 2008diffhist−64
Clara Barton Award
I was going to ask for a citation, but changed my mind. It's irrelevant who the youngest recipient was. What about the first one? The oldest one? The one who received it the soonest after joining?
12:3012:30, 30 April 2008diffhist+10
Brown & Williamson
This article makes many strong statements, and really does need footnotes and references. Removes peacock "the highly respected".
12:0512:05, 30 April 2008diffhist−44
Ibanez GIO
Removes apparent joke / vandalism "Downshifter model not available in Australia". Correct me if I'm wrong. As a joke, it's pretty funny, tho.