09:2109:21, 8 February 2011diffhist−74
Vince Lombardi
fix my typo, remove inconsequential cuss word, remove my borderline original research which was not important nor relevant
14:5814:58, 6 February 2011diffhist−33
Vince Lombardi
i do not think the funeral being held at 10am on labor day is significant, if it was held at midnight that would be significant
03:4003:40, 6 February 2011diffhist−143
Vince Lombardi
delete redundant words in the lead...i can not delete englewood stuff at this time...it needs to be move out of the lead
03:3303:33, 6 February 2011diffhist−191
Vince Lombardi
good, move hbo.com ref down to fordham so i have a ref for "football scholarship" - instead of my borderline OR stuff, NYG & GBP stuff in main body
02:2902:29, 6 February 2011diffhist−153
Vince Lombardi
remove redundant sentence, unnecessary wording and tuck uncited Nixon telegram into funeral paragraph ...need source for williams..and where did his players sit?
01:5901:59, 6 February 2011diffhist−14
Vince Lombardi
the john mitchell good example does not work with Lombardi, Lombardi is a "national icon" and arguably the greatest football couch ever who transcended the sportTag: section blanking
00:0900:09, 5 February 2011diffhist−277
Vince Lombardi
I took Maraniss wrong. It looks like Lombardi just wanted his family nearby, but not necessarily at the game. This needs reworkTag: references removed