06:0106:01, 21 September 2015diffhist−3,521
Self-arrest
For fuck's sake. What the fuck are you doing? Do you have ANY fucking clue what an encyclopaedia article is supposed to look like?
03:1503:15, 18 September 2015diffhist−77
Dixie
rm claim of fame, text about 1920s which makes no sense, and word "experience" which makes no sense in this context,
03:0103:01, 18 September 2015diffhist−412
H-index
avoid interrupting sentences and explaining things twice. just make the first explanation good enough. also, suggestions don't have error bars.
03:0103:01, 18 September 2015diffhist−103
G-index
if you need to say "in other words", that either means the first set of words wasn't good enough, or that you're being verbose. In this case, it looks like the latter.
03:0103:01, 18 September 2015diffhist−412
H-index
avoid interrupting sentences and explaining things twice. just make the first explanation good enough. also, suggestions don't have error bars.
02:1702:17, 18 September 2015diffhist−136
Self-arrest
shockingly poor intro. it doesn't refer to that, it is that; the reader can understand what "arrests" means without assistance; no need for cumbersome gender-specific pronouns; and rm unencyclopaedic "advice"