23 June 2009

• 15:28 15:28, 23 June 2009 diff hist −625‎ User talk:128.100.5.116 ‎ You try to improve things...
• 15:27 15:27, 23 June 2009 diff hist +190‎ User talk:Harryzilber ‎ →‎Congratulations.: new section
• 14:48 14:48, 23 June 2009 diff hist −119‎ Wan Hu ‎ Undid revision 298042004 by Matthead ( talk) it is an uncited original interpretation.
• 14:43 14:43, 23 June 2009 diff hist −5‎ List of doughnut varieties ‎ →‎Other toroidal foods: not another one. actually, maybe this whole section should go, it looks like OR.
• 14:43 14:43, 23 June 2009 diff hist −5‎ List of doughnut varieties ‎ →‎Other toroidal foods: ack, pfft
• 14:42 14:42, 23 June 2009 diff hist −5‎ List of doughnut varieties ‎ →‎Other toroidal foods: "-oid" means "-shaped" (though forming a noun rather than an adjective), so this is rather like "ATM machine"
• 14:39 14:39, 23 June 2009 diff hist +1‎ List of doughnut varieties ‎ →‎Variations and specialties by region: what? he's in a sandy place... drowning in a dessert... he's ill... he's got a bad leg... what? Gone With the Wind?
• 14:29 14:29, 23 June 2009 diff hist +810‎ Talk:Tobacco ‎ →‎Date of Y1 development

22 June 2009

• 14:38 14:38, 22 June 2009 diff hist +55‎ Coconut oil ‎ →‎Health effects
• 14:23 14:23, 22 June 2009 diff hist −5‎ Chamois leather ‎ →‎Properties: "fuel" could be anything - the context doesn't make clear that it is automotive fuel we mean
• 14:05 14:05, 22 June 2009 diff hist −11‎ Mannequin ‎ the one in the lead photo is much less than life-sized, and that is typical of the artists' style of mannikin

19 June 2009

• 18:59 18:59, 19 June 2009 diff hist +951‎ Talk:Tobacco mosaic virus ‎ →‎"and is now know to be the + strand"
• 17:20 17:20, 19 June 2009 diff hist +368‎ Talk:Tobacco ‎ →‎Date of Y1 development

18 June 2009

• 19:29 19:29, 18 June 2009 diff hist −32‎ Toronto Transit Commission ‎ →‎Communications: dead reckoning is state-of-the-art for road vehicles, and also the basis for inertial navigation (which is by no means antiquated)
• 18:53 18:53, 18 June 2009 diff hist −29‎ Visiting card ‎ →‎See also: rm dead (speedied) article

16 June 2009

• 15:17 15:17, 16 June 2009 diff hist +1,373‎ N Template talk:Zodiac date ‎ ←Created page with '==Cusp date== Would it be possible to expand this template, or create a new one, to allow the possibility of generating just one date (the cusp date)? There is an ...'

15 June 2009

• 22:23 22:23, 15 June 2009 diff hist +2‎ Isopropyl alcohol ‎ →‎Toxicology: affect/effect, and comma splice
• 21:29 21:29, 15 June 2009 diff hist +33‎ Sherlock Holmes ‎ →‎Use of drugs: previous edit here was borderline vandalism, changing the meaning of the sentence entirely - yes, he went to the place, but no, he didn't partake.
• 21:07 21:07, 15 June 2009 diff hist −26‎ Wu-Tang Clan ‎ →‎The Notorious B.I.G.: hip-hop slang is not the language of Wikipedia, and that meaning is not in wiktionary; if it's a quote it should be marked, otherwise we should be writing in English
• 20:33 20:33, 15 June 2009 diff hist −72‎ Silly Putty ‎ →‎External links: rm purely commercial link
• 20:30 20:30, 15 June 2009 diff hist −15‎ Silly Putty ‎ →‎Description: "laid" is just too precious. What sort of animal?
• 20:26 20:26, 15 June 2009 diff hist −24‎ Silly Putty ‎ no need to list this (relatively nonstandard) name twice
• 20:23 20:23, 15 June 2009 diff hist −15‎ Yo-yo ‎ Undid revision 296585221 by 142.27.170.9 ( talk)
• 20:17 20:17, 15 June 2009 diff hist +493‎ Talk:Tobacco ‎ →‎Date of Y1 development: new section

28 May 2009

• 15:15 15:15, 28 May 2009 diff hist +4‎ Pulled pork ‎ →‎Preparation: don't noun my verbs

26 May 2009

• 19:38 19:38, 26 May 2009 diff hist −469‎ Magnetic ink character recognition ‎ unreferenced and borderline advertising
• 19:15 19:15, 26 May 2009 diff hist +2‎ Betel nut chewing ‎ →‎Vietnam
• 17:30 17:30, 26 May 2009 diff hist +1,403‎ User talk:Paul August ‎ →‎Square roots?
• 15:17 15:17, 26 May 2009 diff hist −31‎ Char siu ‎ →‎Chinese cuisine: char siu rice means rice with roasted pork, so "served also with roasted pork" is nonsense
• 15:13 15:13, 26 May 2009 diff hist +552‎ User talk:Paul August ‎ →‎Square roots?: new section

25 May 2009

• 20:01 20:01, 25 May 2009 diff hist −12‎ Legal status of fictional pornography depicting minors ‎ →‎Canada: if they're notable, they should have their own articles, but bolding names isn't WP style ( WP:MOSBOLD)
• 19:45 19:45, 25 May 2009 diff hist +895‎ Template talk:Infobox zodiac sign ‎ →‎"Zodiac": new section
• 16:25 16:25, 25 May 2009 diff hist +2‎ Lobelia tupa ‎ comma splice
• 16:09 16:09, 25 May 2009 diff hist −28‎ Areca nut ‎ →‎Effects on health: clean up: clarify which refs are media reports and which are the studies themselves, etc.
• 14:59 14:59, 25 May 2009 diff hist +11‎ Ophiuchus ‎ →‎Astrology: not clear that ANY astrologers ever use Ophiucus; it needs a citation

22 May 2009

• 14:45 14:45, 22 May 2009 diff hist −363‎ Template:Zodiac ‎ nobody has joined the discussion, but let's just be bold - these symbols are astrological and don't belong in the astronomical section

21 May 2009

• 18:19 18:19, 21 May 2009 diff hist −62‎ Goldstone (glass) ‎ this tiny black-and-white image doesn't seem to add anything to the article when we already have a better one

19 May 2009

• 20:11 20:11, 19 May 2009 diff hist +659‎ Talk:Ear candling ‎ →‎Excessive scope: new section
• 18:52 18:52, 19 May 2009 diff hist −30‎ 3-MCPD ‎ 1,3-diol would be a different compound
• 18:51 18:51, 19 May 2009 diff hist 0‎ Oyster sauce ‎ →‎Health: see linked article. "3-monochloropropane-1,2-diol" would not be a legitimate IUPAC name because it could be rewritten as 1-mono(etc.) and designate same compound
• 18:49 18:49, 19 May 2009 diff hist +12‎ Fish and chips ‎ →‎Choice of fish: squid ain't fish
• 18:34 18:34, 19 May 2009 diff hist −24‎ Betel nut chewing ‎ →‎See also: "see also" is for articles

15 May 2009

• 14:56 14:56, 15 May 2009 diff hist −70‎ Cotton candy ‎ →‎Production: this is covered better in the immediately previous "History" section
• 14:44 14:44, 15 May 2009 diff hist −10‎ Template:Culture of Oceania ‎ "betel nut" incorrect and potentially offensive (see its article)
• 14:43 14:43, 15 May 2009 diff hist 0‎ Areca nut ‎ →‎Effects on health: here too
• 14:38 14:38, 15 May 2009 diff hist 0‎ Areca nut ‎ →‎Effects on health: as stated elsewhere in the article, the phrase "betel nut" is technically incorrect, and some editors seem to think it's also offensive
• 14:35 14:35, 15 May 2009 diff hist +182‎ Betel ‎ →‎Chewing: replace uncited with cited information

13 May 2009

• 19:19 19:19, 13 May 2009 diff hist −2‎ Okinawan scripts ‎ the point of the sentence is that speakers can't understand each other - it either "is mutually unintelligible" or "is not mutually intelligible"

8 May 2009

• 22:36 22:36, 8 May 2009 diff hist −8‎ Sherlock Holmes ‎ in almost none of his appearances does his name in fact appear in the title of the story; hence, not titular.
• 22:31 22:31, 8 May 2009 diff hist +3‎ Haw flakes ‎ Undid revision 286001943 by 68.146.115.90 ( talk) obvious from the photo that the roll contains more than 15