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... that PGA Tour golfer Max Greyserman's mother competed in a golf tournament 13 years after being diagnosed with multiple sclerosis?

Source: "His mom, Elaine, who was diagnosed with multiple sclerosis 15 years ago, competed in the inaugural U.S. Adaptive Open at Pinehurst No. 6 two years ago in the neurological impairment division."

or ALT1:

... that PGA Tour golfer Max Greyserman and his brother Reed are the first brothers to win the New Jersey Amateur Championship?

Source: "Reed and Max are the first set of brothers to win the Amateur in NJSGA history."

or ALT2:

... that a year before golfer Max Greyserman earned his first PGA Tour card, he considered a different career path?

Source: "in 2022, Greyserman briefly considered alternative career paths" and October 2023 article: "Max Greyserman has earned his first PGA TOUR card"

— Preceding unsigned comment added by 2603:7000:2101:AA00:A91E:FA5D:EAB2:D6B0 ( talk) 08:56, 20 July 2024 (UTC) reply

- Reviewed: Masada myth
- Comment: Nominated on behalf of an IP editor who will, as usual, provide the QPQ.

Moved to mainspace by Schwede66 ( talk) and 2603:7000:2101:AA00:A91E:FA5D:EAB2:D6B0 ( talk). Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 150 past nominations.

Schwede 66 08:39, 20 July 2024 (UTC). reply

General: Article is new enough and long enough
New enough: Long enough:

Policy: Article is sourced, neutral, and free of copyright problems
Adequate sourcing: Neutral: Free of copyright violations, plagiarism, and close paraphrasing:

Hook: Hook has been verified by provided inline citation
Cited: Interesting:

QPQ: Done.

Overall: 8 of the 16 citations were checked for verification and close paraphrasing; no issues arose. I prefer ALT2 because the focus is on the subject of the article. ALT1 may mention a record being set, but the PGA Tour is more prestigious than the New Jersey Amateur Championship, so I still prefer ALT2. Yue 🌙 17:57, 20 July 2024 (UTC) reply