Draft:shooting Of Julian Dawkins

Marlon Brown
Marlon Brown
Born	March 4, 1975
Died	May 22, 2013 (aged 38); East Cleveland, Ohio
Nationality	American

Shooting of Julian Dawkins and Marlon Brown
Date	May 22, 2013
Location	Riverside, California
Type	Killing by law enforcement officers
Deaths	Julian Dawkins and Marlon Brown
Non-fatal injuries	2 police officers
Charges	No charges filed

Julian Dawkins
Julian Dawkins
Born	May 12, 1991
Died	May 22, 2013 (aged 21); Riverside, California
Nationality	American

Submission declined on 20 June 2024 by ReaderofthePack ( talk).

This draft's references do not show that the subject qualifies for a Wikipedia article. In summary, the draft needs multiple published sources that are:

in-depth (not just passing mentions about the subject)
reliable
secondary
independent of the subject

Make sure you add references that meet these criteria before resubmitting. Learn about mistakes to avoid when addressing this issue. If no additional references exist, the subject is not suitable for Wikipedia.

If you would like to continue working on the submission, click on the "Edit" tab at the top of the window.
If you have not resolved the issues listed above, your draft will be declined again and potentially deleted.
If you need extra help, please ask us a question at the AfC Help Desk or get live help from experienced editors.
Please do not remove reviewer comments or this notice until the submission is accepted.

Where to get help

If you need help editing or submitting your draft, please ask us a question at the AfC Help Desk or get live help from experienced editors. These venues are only for help with editing and the submission process, not to get reviews.
If you need feedback on your draft, or if the review is taking a lot of time, you can try asking for help on the talk page of a relevant WikiProject. Some WikiProjects are more active than others so a speedy reply is not guaranteed.

How to improve a draft

Wikipedia:Contributing to Wikipedia – a basic overview on how to edit Wikipedia.
Help:Wikitext – how to use the markup
Help:Referencing for beginners – how to include references
Wikipedia:Article development – how to develop your article
Wikipedia:Writing better articles – how to improve your article
Wikipedia:Verifiability – make sure your article includes reliable third-party sources

You can also browse Wikipedia:Featured articles and Wikipedia:Good articles to find examples of Wikipedia's best writing on topics similar to your proposed article.

Improving your odds of a speedy review

To improve your odds of a faster review, tag your draft with relevant WikiProject tags using the button below. This will let reviewers know a new draft has been submitted in their area of interest. For instance, if you wrote about a female astronomer, you would want to add the Biography, Astronomy, and Women scientists tags.

Add tags to your draft

Editor resources

Find sources: Google ( books · news · scholar · free images · WP refs) · FENS · JSTOR · TWL
Easy tools: Citation bot ( help) | Advanced: Fix bare URLs

Declined by ReaderofthePack 20 days ago. Last edited by ReaderofthePack 20 days ago. Reviewer: Inform author.

Resubmit

Please note that if the issues are not fixed, the draft will be declined again.

Comment: This is an extremely tragic event, however you will need to show where this is notable outside of the local area. This can be done by providing sources to establish how this was discussed on a global scale and by showing additional coverage over time - keep in mind that this will need to pass WP:CRIME. Offhand it looks like it got a brief amount of coverage when it happened, but not beyond that. ReaderofthePack(formerly Tokyogirl79) (｡◕‿◕｡) 16:05, 20 June 2024 (UTC)

Julian Dawkins (May 12, 1991 - May 22, 2013) age 22 was shot by BART Police Same as Oscar Grant, who died in 2009, Dawkins will be buried New Cemetery.

Shooting of Julian Dawkins and Marlon Brown

Marlon Brown

Marlon Brown (March 4, 1975 - May 22 2013) was an American shopper who came to see Julian Dawkins in 20 May 2013. Marlon’s brother Thomas Brown who is from UK. Marlon was shot in May 22 2013.

References:

^ Cite error: The named reference kdlg1 was invoked but never defined (see the help page).

1. https://www.pbs.org/newshour/nation/remembering-julian-dawkins 2. https://mynews13.com/fl/orlando/news/2015/3/16/marlon_brown_s_famil

[kdlg1-1] Cite error: The named reference kdlg1 was invoked but never defined (see the help page).

[1]

Julian Dawkins
Born	(1991-05-12)May 12, 1991
Died	May 22, 2013(2013-05-22) (aged 21) Riverside, California
Nationality	American

Marlon Brown
Born	(1975-03-04)March 4, 1975
Died	May 22, 2013(2013-05-22) (aged 38) East Cleveland, Ohio
Nationality	American