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| Hinagahime
肥長比売 | |
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| Princess | |
| Spouse | Homutsuwake no Mikoto |
| House | Imperial House of Japan |
Hinagahime (肥長比売), was the spouse of Homutsuwake no Mikoto for just one day.
After Homutsuwake no Mikoto learnt to speak, he went to live in a palace at Ajimasa. [1] [2] Once he moved here, he married Hinagahime. [1] [2] Yet, the same night, she turned into a serpent, so Homutsuwake no Mikoto flees. He flees up some valleys until he reaches Yamato Province. Hinagahime is left behind. [1] [2]
Outside of her marriage, she is believed to be a goddess of Hinokawa River which flows through Izumo plains. She might also be a Yōkai. [3]
- ^ a b c Chamberlain, B. H. (1932) “Translation of the Kojiki.” Kobe: J.L. Thompson & Co.
- ^ a b c Yasumaro. O, translated by Gustav Heldt. (2014) “Kojiki. An Account of Ancient Matters”. New York: Columbia University Press.
- ^ 이경화 (June 2015). "'추격하는 여신' 전승의 계보 - 이자나미･히나가히메･기요히메를 중심으로 -". 日本思想 (in Korean). 28: 163–187. ISSN 1229-9235.
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